Up-In-The-Clouds

Jul 1, 2013

Looks pretty good, actually. You seem like a down to earth, normal guy, and that's good. I'd recommend getting some new pictures one way or another though, like your top photo.

doDAHdoDAHdodo

Jul 2, 2013

10/10 Great all around. Pictures paint a good picture of who you are.

perkynquirky

Jul 2, 2013

Hey! Great profile! Very long but seems to condense who you are well

youngspiritinMD

Jul 3, 2013

@perkynquirky like the profile, i also have a thing for short hair females. 7/10 for the profile

lispy

Jul 3, 2013

apersonlooking:  Success is a fine thing, but sheesh, could you brag more?  Also, your second photo is more flattering than your first.  Move it up one.

Ebay313

Jul 4, 2013

Lispy: 9/10. Fairly in depth profile.

gambulance

Jul 4, 2013

Hi Ebay313 -without actually knowing you, I think your profile gives a pretty clear impression of who you are and what makes you tick. You might consider getting rid of picture #3. It's very much like #2 and #2 is better. I also self-identify as bisexual here (I prefer queer, but whatever) and met up with quite a lot of criticism when I said I was only looking for girls who like girls. I've changed mine back to looking for both now but good for you for sticking to your guns. 

AlCappuccino

Jul 4, 2013

8/10.  A good read, though I would remove the part about not being good at describing yourself, but that's just my take on it.

gambulance

Jul 4, 2013

Hi AlCappuccino - I was going to say I never said I was not good at describing myself but now realize that lucky ebay got TWO reviews. So here goes AlCappuccino - you seem fun and exciting. Your opening paragraph is excellent - In it you basically sum up what you're here for. You've told us what you like to do, you are straightforward about what you are persuing and what you are good at without bragging, and.... you told us what you want in a woman. The choice of cooking in your main photo is probably a good choice too. I personally think you will find someone with this profile - it shows you are funny and genuine and therefore I give you a 9/10. In order to get 10/10 I would add a better, less grainy picture of your smiling face and tell us what what field of interest your degree is in and maybe talk less about the game of thrones because all that info will likely alienate girls who do not watch it. Unless watching game of thrones is one of your own parameters. In which case, leave it in.

Eat_Pray_Die

Jul 4, 2013

10/10. Mission accomplished.

Mathman1ca

Jul 4, 2013

10/10. The single most awesome profile I had ever seen. Riveting. Every picture a glimpse into oblivion. Even word a silent sound. Every thought, an evocation that pushed me further into the eternal dark, dusky void. I am utterly unable to convey the depth of my emotions. 

 

Epic.

roladecolombia

Jul 5, 2013

^10.  Really creative.  Gives insight to your personality and it was an entertaining read. 

Phaetonics

Jul 6, 2013

roladecolombia: I enjoy your profile. I am, debatably, a huge, cynical asshole. I found your profile to be genuine, truthful, and endearing.

Specifically, I find your self-summary to be comprehensive, but not dull. I dig on the specificity of your claims, and I dig on this specific comment: "I hope to find the guy who can offer me support/encouragement when politics breaks my heart, as she can be a mercurial mistress."

Quick jab--I do not dig on the term "joie de vivre"--just personal preference, I hear that term a lot, and if you are a super-fluent French-speaker--rock that shit. Otherwise, -in my opinion-, reconsider.

Other quick reactions:

-Air conditioning? Not required. I am certain that you can find a lover who lives in a place where air conditioning is not a big deal. Or, you can overcome this situation in spite of "true love".

Other than my petulant whining--Your profile is well written, appealing, and honest. How many others on this site can claim the same?

-Love, P

lispy

Jul 6, 2013

Ebay: what's  the final 1/10 missing, or needing removal?

perkynquirky

Apr 1

Your profile is looking good, but is a tad long. Maybe add the Patron Saint of Lost Causes and other funny bits to different sections?

RandomImpulse

Apr 1

8, interesting though brief

Ganmega

Apr 1

9 - careful attention to detail and vivid conveyance of self, but possibly intimidating to some

RentonSeven

Apr 2

7.5 - The Dalek was awesome.

perkynquirky

Apr 3

@randomimpulse. I'm glad you find it interesting. Too brief? Any other constructive criticism?

perkynquirky

Apr 3

@RentonSeven: Dude, use spaces between sentences! And have your friend take a picture of you somewhere with natural light. Focus on the positive and the concrete. Put more attention on what makes you unique (maybe discuss your job?) rather than saying that you love the Internet. Everyone loves the Internet. You weren't overly sarcastic and it was an appropriate length

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