Brenttattoo

Jan 14, 2013 5:12am

It's been a while since I've been here...
New stuff added to my profile...
Anyone want to give it a look and tell me what you think?

Brenttattoo

Jan 17, 2013 11:27am

Evidently....My profile is perfect...

-Halohydrin-

Jan 17, 2013 6:16pm

The blahblahblahs get old pretty quick, and I find it odd that you're reading a book about that peter puffer from Six Feet Under.

Sushibitch

Jan 17, 2013 6:35pm

It kind of looks like you're planning to get round to actually writing your profile and have just put in some placeholder text in the meantime. I dunno, maybe the blahblahblah thing will appeal to some people, but personally I think I'd click on to the next profile pretty quickly. I guess if it feels like you don't want to write about yourself, I'm probably not going to want to read about you either.

RainInABottle

Jan 18, 2013 12:49am

You need to make your profile more concise. Don't highlight everything you like, just the key things. Blahs are bad. After I worked on my profile I started getting really nice replies. Need to start somewhere on the totem poll. Spell checker is your best friend! Also know that not everyone's advice will represent your profile needs, just look for the common suggestions. Typically when you're working on anything repeat patterns mean something. So drop the blahs. Formatting is very important! :)

Brenttattoo

Jan 18, 2013 4:40pm

Ok...tightened it up a bit...added a recent pic...not that I look any different now...

 

Brenttattoo

Jan 18, 2013 8:46pm

...and now a full re-vamp...

What9Thousand

Jan 20, 2013 8:12pm

Oh my god, dude. Way... too fucking... much... of this...

Don't substitute ellipses for all other punctuation. It's atrocious.

xJealousOrchard

Jan 20, 2013 9:07pm

Lol I used to abuse ellipses so much when I was writing my shitty anime fanfics in middle and high school

"Inuyasha... please...don't go..."

"Kikyo... I..."

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