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So not to long ago I got board with my profile and gave it some
what of an overhaul...
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The problem with a profile full of limericks is with certain ones and too many of them you get the thought its a cheesy profile; not to mention after a while it loses steam, so when it comes time to hit a home run at the end of your profile you keep striking out because the reader is bored of it by then; instead of excited to reply. P.S. All Face photos, poor quality control on photos, and lack of variety might have something to do with it too. |
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that was entirely too much. i couldnt even finish it. i felt like i was reading a horrfic version of edward leer. not entertaining. and work on your homophones |
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God yes. It needs another revamp. Maybe a limerick or two would be alright, but god it's.. god. Points for originality, though. |
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heh. ok, I culled %90. of it. thanks for the advice. |
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...and I did this by rewriting a large chunk of it as limericks.
See, I am of the opinion that limericks don't get the love in our fast paced modern society that they did in days of old and I feel obliged to bring them back.Dorky? Oh my goodness yes, But dorky is fun, and I feel it'll be memorable at least. My worry is that it doesn't actually sound as good in the light of day as it did when I wrote it at 3:43am on a after studying for 5 hours and coming down from caffeine buzz.
So, internet; Do you think this is a bit much? and is there anything else wrong with my profile?