You wanna know what my writing looks like, i am going to post up a story i wrote just for fun check it and let me know what ou think! Yes i am hopelessly romantic which is kinda sad no girls seem to like that lol just a warning.

As i stand looking out over the field were a brutal battle had just been held. The casualties scattered along the field . The sun shines bright in the sky as i walk the field looking for any survivors offering my hand to any that may take it. I can recall the feirce battle that took place here. The intensity of the event has taken its tole on myself as well. My body aches all over and my mind is completely stirred. My vision has become blurred from the lack of sleep that i have had to endure. The wounds from this battle will soon heal but the scares will remind me of the pain and suffering that was seen here today. But what was it all for? Was it all for nothing. I fall to my knees as i see my enemy standing with nothing more than a grin on his face. Have i failed to win this battle yet i still have more men by myside than him. Yet the weight of defeat lingers on my shoulder and i can only ask "how can this be?" I turn to my side to see my number one is no were in sight. I grit my teeth as i look up to see him standing next to my enemy... My heart shatters as i see him there. "How could you just betray me after all these years of trust and love?" My heart is now empty i feel like i cant move an inch of my body. The men that i have by my side pick me up to my feet. I can only smile as i see that they have been more than loyal, not to mention i am greatful for the knights that came from the vast darkness to loan an hand. I look outward to see my enemy throw down his sword with a devilish grin. It all became to real so fast as a unnerving chill ran up my spine. I see in the distance the goddess that assisted me in the battle. It becomes a foot race to her as my enemy throws this helmet under my feet. I land on my face and skid to a stop as i can only watch in horror as he reaches her. The collision between his hatred and her pureness created a blinding blast. I can only sheild my eyes from the startling sight. As the dust settles i look to see them both gone. "how... can this be?" I scramble over to the scene of the blast only to see the garmets of my enemy laying on the ground. My heart once empty now filled with anger. "How could i have failed you..." Now i sit the in the smoke looking to the sky seeing that her essense is still there but no longer with me. I am happy to see her well and alive and even more so that my enemy will no longer be a thorn in my side. My heart breaks as i know that she will no longer entrust me with guarding her. I can only accept her wishes as i walk defeated to my crew of men. I will continue to serve till my trust has been restored because my goddess not only is what drives me to be the best... she has my heart.