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ghoulie_girl

36 / F / straight / Single

Chicago, Illinois

Her journal posts

In the begining....

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It wasn’t what he ever would have expected.

He heard the water running and thought it would be great fun to startle her in the shower. Just a bit of a jump to make her laugh and get her adrenaline flowing would be great.
He threw back the curtain and started to yell, “BOO!”
Not even the simple syllable would leave his throat when he saw her.

She sat in a ball in the bottom of the tub.
Her head was on her knees and her arms wrapped around herself.
As the water ran down her naked body it carried with it the blood that ran from the cuts on her thighs.
The utility razor sat in the bottom of the tub next to her.
She raised her head and pushed he hair out of her face.
She looked towards him slowly. He thought he would see her crying. Instead she looked quizzical…the expression on her face almost a confused innocence.
She stared in silence.
He stammered, “Uh…I…I let myself in. I didn’t…I should leave you alone and let you finish your….”
She interrupted by turning off the water and simply pointing up at the towel which hung on the pipes over his head. He pulled it down and wrapped it around her shoulders. He sat on the edge of the tub but turned his head away from her. He felt oddly uncomfortable with her nudity. If he really took the time to think about it he would have realized it wasn’t her lack of clothing that made him feel so awkward. It was her genuine nakedness.
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Just getting it started. Maybe later I'll finish.
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It wasn’t what he ever would have expected.

He heard the water running and thought it would be great fun tostartle her in the shower. Just a bit of a jump to make her laughand get her adrenaline flowing would be great.
He threw back the curtain and started to yell, “BOO!”
Not even the simple syllable would leave his throat when he sawher.

She sat in a ball in the bottom of the tub.
Her head was on her knees and her arms wrapped aroundherself.
As the water ran down her naked body it carried with it the bloodthat ran from the cuts on her thighs.
The utility razor sat in the bottom of the tub next to her.
She raised her head and pushed he hair out of her face.
She looked towards him slowly. He thought he would see her crying.Instead she looked quizzical…the expression on her face almost aconfused innocence.
She stared in silence.
He stammered, “Uh…I…I let myself in. I didn’t…I should leave youalone and let you finish your….”
She interrupted by turning off the water and simply pointing up atthe towel which hung on the pipes over his head. He pulled it downand wrapped it around her shoulders. He sat on the edge of the tubbut turned his head away from her. He felt oddly uncomfortable withher nudity. If he really took the time to think about it he wouldhave realized it wasn’t her lack of clothing that made him feel soawkward. It was her genuine nakedness.
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Just getting it started. Maybe later I'll finish.
In the begining....
An image of neflhim Very nicely written!

neflhim commented on

An image of 19marc64 Very intense!

19marc64 commented on

An image of hyena9 I'm intrigued by your two characters. Who are they to each other? Is he always trying to get a rise out of her? Is she always so stoic? What a great start!

hyena9 commented on

Default user image Very nicely written indeed! I hope you decide to continue. I'd like to read more. =]

Sexi_Kitti commented on

An image of themysteriousx Wow that is pretty good. I like how it flows very naturally.

themysteriousx commented on

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