I think we all have stumbled our way through writing an
entertaining yet honest and provocative description. What to say,
how to say it, how to impress... but not scare anyone away? Be bold
in our words, yet soft and caring. Are we writing to describe who
we are, what we want to be, or what we think others might want us
to be? Can reading a passage really give you a sense of who I am,
or me a sense of who you are? As our culture becomes more and more
acclimated to conversation through type, I find that our written
language needs to grow. Do you know if you are putting the correct
intonation to what's laid out in front of you to judge? Can your
mood while reading my profile change what type of person you think
I am? Let's give it a try…
Intonation: Sentimental
Nature is my sanctuary and my place of comfort, where I feel most at home. I grew up with a strong emphasis on morals, integrity, humility, ingenuity, and family. Many of these lessons came through play, creation, and camping. When I think of my childhood my memories are filled with swimming in ice cold rivers, exploring mountains, and making fires. I can't imagine a future or a family of my own where nature does not play a significant role.
Intonation: Excited
I am and will always be a big kid, and yes there is a big difference between maturity and acting like a kid. I will never give up my sense of wonder or be bogged down by seriousness. I want to be with someone that can laugh at themselves as often as they can at me.
Intonation: Confident and Reserved
I am old fashioned in many ways, chivalry is not dead… or sexist for that matter. The kitchen is a great place to experiment and relax. I'm looking for a girl who equally enjoys a night on the town, dragging the mattress into the living room and watching movies all day, sleeping in a tent, or under the stars if you're brave enough. Someone who embraces their imperfections and may be a little quirky.
Intonation: Sarcastic
I luv takin pict$ o me$elf in da mirror n po$in wit my ride. I think it $oooo hot when $exy $hawty$ give the camera their be$t duck face. I want to be rich and famou$ and have everyone adore me. $omeday my names going to be on a building or a clothing line, I haven't decided yet. YOLO... and I don't mean the county.
Now switch around the intonations and re-read a passage or two… Does it change your opinion of who I am?
(Disclaimer: the above is written with correct intonation stated.)
Intonation: Sentimental
Nature is my sanctuary and my place of comfort, where I feel most at home. I grew up with a strong emphasis on morals, integrity, humility, ingenuity, and family. Many of these lessons came through play, creation, and camping. When I think of my childhood my memories are filled with swimming in ice cold rivers, exploring mountains, and making fires. I can't imagine a future or a family of my own where nature does not play a significant role.
Intonation: Excited
I am and will always be a big kid, and yes there is a big difference between maturity and acting like a kid. I will never give up my sense of wonder or be bogged down by seriousness. I want to be with someone that can laugh at themselves as often as they can at me.
Intonation: Confident and Reserved
I am old fashioned in many ways, chivalry is not dead… or sexist for that matter. The kitchen is a great place to experiment and relax. I'm looking for a girl who equally enjoys a night on the town, dragging the mattress into the living room and watching movies all day, sleeping in a tent, or under the stars if you're brave enough. Someone who embraces their imperfections and may be a little quirky.
Intonation: Sarcastic
I luv takin pict$ o me$elf in da mirror n po$in wit my ride. I think it $oooo hot when $exy $hawty$ give the camera their be$t duck face. I want to be rich and famou$ and have everyone adore me. $omeday my names going to be on a building or a clothing line, I haven't decided yet. YOLO... and I don't mean the county.
Now switch around the intonations and re-read a passage or two… Does it change your opinion of who I am?
(Disclaimer: the above is written with correct intonation stated.)
