"I should probably be doing my homework." ~ me
"This is funny but may be too clever for some. I would be more explicit about your beliefs and philosophies on life. Like the fact that you generally tend towards a Buddhist philosophy. That you love nature. That art is very important to you. That you love exploring new places. That you are interested in language and culture. It's more direct and takes the hard work out of figuring out who you are. It also opens up the market for you as a LOT of women will be confused by your depth. Not to say that you want to hang out with or date dumb shallow women but that being too cerebral straight up might intimidate or alienate some genuinely nice ladies who are not necessarily as well read or spiritual as you. "
~ a girl I know who looked at this