Apr 14, 2013 6:41am

Looking for suggestions or critique. Tell me what is wrong and how it could be improved? Thanks a bunch!


Apr 15, 2013 3:35am

Between the glare and the sunglasses, your main picture barely shows your face.  The skiing one is better - make it your main picture, and try to get some more pictures like that.

The rest of your profile is kind of boring but inoffensive.  If you're not getting replies to messages you send, the problem is probably more with the messages than with your profile.

If you want to rewrite your profile: Kill the bullet lists.  Show, don't tell.  Specifics are better than generalities, and opinions are better than facts.  Try to avoid stating the obvious (e.g., under your "message me if" section) - if you don't have anything non-obvious to say, just leave the section blank.


Apr 17, 2013 4:00pm

Thanks khb17! That was insightful.


Apr 17, 2013 4:32pm

Doesn't seem that bad to me but I laughed in a probably not positive way at "what I'm doing with my life" being commuting and listening to the radio. 

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